Well if it is too vanalla for you then do not read it, but I think the story is just getting started. I think it has just been a good lead up to the good stuff :p

Nice to see another chapter. I am one who can be guilty of reading, yet not having much time to reply. I understand as well the discouragement that can come from thinking no one wants to read what you write due to no feedback. :)

Personally, I try to go by number of times viewed than feedback, knowing that probably only 1% of readers will actually respond.

Keep writing, amber! You have readers, even if they are silent!

sarah